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HaikuWriMo

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HaikuWriMo

February 6
My eyes start to bleed
Drip, drop onto a paper
I don't want to see.

(OR an alternative last sentence: My world turns crimson.
Still thinking on this one.)

February 7
Golden skies look down
Upon a girl who sees clouds
Move faster than her.

February 8
Hope in a bottle
Drifts and wanders, lost, until
Someone opens it.
Haikus are just fabulous. However...my grammar...ugh.
I don't think I could do haikus daily but I'll see what I can do. ^^
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I like the last one the best. It's kind of... romantic, as in romanticism. (ps: I like the 'my world turns crimson' line; it stays more in the mood of the first line)